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July 3, 2009

You Said?

Filed under: Mona 2 — Tags: , , , , , , , , — dansideas @ 8:33 pm


You called on my birthday.
I said it meant a lot to me.
You said you wanted it to
Mean a lot to me.
What did you mean?
I called and you said you
Were in a hurry and
Could not talk now but
Later tonight would be okay.
I called five times.
Finally got you at 10:59 PM.
All you could say was
“It’s late”.
Yes, It is late,
Too late.
Even friendship no longer
I think you have finally
Killed the last spark of



  1. that happened to a friend of mine…
    great poem! I really like most of them! 🙂


    Comment by xxhawkeyexx — July 3, 2009 @ 8:44 pm

    • Glad some of them please you. I did not write with the thoughts of pleasing anyone. Just needed to unload all that was filling my mind at the times I wrote them. Love and anger seem to hand in hand for me. But then I have anger for things I do not love too.

      Comment by dansideas — July 3, 2009 @ 8:56 pm

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